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miércoles, 6 de octubre de 2010


This summer has been very enjoyable for me. At first, in June,
I was in Seville with my friends. Later, I went to the beach
because my family has got a house in The Puerto de Santa María
(Cadiz) and it is there where we used to spend ours holidays.
There, I have got a lot of friends and we did differents activities:
we went to the cinema to see The Karate Kid (It is very funny),
we played football and tennis, we went out everi night...
I stayed in the beach until the fist of August when I had to
return to Seville becuase I started the training sessions with
my football team, Seviilla Football Club. I went to train
each mornings and the tuesday and the thursday, I took
English classes. With my football team I often played friendly
matches and even we went to play a championship to Nerja (Málaga),
in the photo, with others teams like Real Madrid C.F., Málaga and
Real Betis. These are my holidays.

Thank you Borja!

And now, are you able to correct the mistakes in red?
Come on, send me your corrections! I´m looking forward to them!!!

6 comentarios:

  1. This summer has been very enjoyable for me. At first, in June,
    I was in Seville with my friends. Later, I went to the beach
    because my family has got a house in The Puerto de Santa María
    (Cadiz) and it is there where we spended ours holidays.
    There, I have got a lot of friends and we did maked activities:
    we went to the cinema to see The Karate Kid (It is very funny),
    we played football and tennis, we went out every night...
    I stayed in the beach until the first of August when I had to
    return to Seville becuase I started the training sessions with
    my football team, Sevilla Football Club. I went to train
    all mornings the tuesday and the thursday, I took
    English classes. With my football team I often played friendly
    matches and even we went to play a championship to Nerja (Málaga),
    in the photo, with other teams like Real Madrid C.F., Málaga and
    Real Betis. These was my holidays.

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  2. This summer has been very enjoyable for me. At first, in June,
    I was in Seville with my friends. Later, I went to the beach
    because my family has got a house in The Puerto de Santa María
    (Cadiz) and it is there where we spendt ours holidays.There, I have got a lot of friends and we did several activities:
    we went to the cinema to see The Karate Kid (It is very funny),we played football and tennis, we went out every night...
    I stayed in the beach until the first of August when I had to return to Seville becuase I started the training sessions with my football team, Sevilla Football Club. I went to train every mornings on tuesday and on thursday. I took English classes. With my football team I often played friendly matches and even we went to play a championship to Nerja (Málaga),in the photo, with anothers teams like Real Madrid C.F., Málaga andReal Betis.This were my holidays

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  3. This summer has been very enjoyable for me. At first, in June,
    I was in Seville with my friends. Later, I went to the beach
    because my family has got a house in The Puerto de Santa María
    (Cadiz) and it is there where we have spent ours holidays.
    There, I have got a lot of friends and we did some activities:
    we went to the cinema to see The Karate Kid (It is very funny),
    we played football and tennis, we went out every night...
    I stayed in the beach until the first of August when I had to
    return to Seville because I started the training sessions with
    my football team, Sevilla Football Club. I went to train
    every mornings and on tuesday and on thursday, I took
    English classes. With my football team I often played friendly
    matches and even we went to play a championship to Nerja (Málaga),
    in the photo, with other teams like Real Madrid C.F., Málaga and
    Real Betis. These was my holidays.

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  4. Hi Paula!
    I think you know how was my holidays... because you was with me!
    I went to philadelphia with a group from ac.preuniversitaria and it was so amazing!!
    we lived in a house with our americans students exchange and it was a new experience because we had to go to their american school, we had to eat what they eat, we had to adapt us to their weather... it wasn't easy but it was so funny!
    We visited NY, Washington... and we bought a lot of presents for our family and friends! Washington was beautiful, but i loved New York because we have walked for 5th avenue, wall street, central park... and everithing is like the american movies! everyone is different, their clothes, their hairstyle...
    So, what else i can say? I LOVED USA, I LOVED PA, AND.... I WANNA COME BACK!!!

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  5. This summer has been very enjoyable for me. At first, in June,
    I was in Seville with my friends. Later, I went to the beach
    because my family has got a house in The Puerto de Santa María
    (Cadiz) and it is there where we usually spend ours holidays.
    There, I have got a lot of friends and we did different activities:
    we went to the cinema to see The Karate Kid (It is very funny),
    we played football and tennis, we went out everi night...
    I stayed in the beach until the fist of August when I had to
    return to Seville becuase I started the training sessions with
    my football team, Seville Football Club. I went to train
    each morning and every tuesday and thursday, I took
    English classes. With my football team I often played friendly
    matches and even we went to play a championship to Nerja (Málaga),
    in the photo, with other teams like Real Madrid C.F., Málaga and
    Real Betis. These are(I think that these is good)my holidays.
    By:Emilio Jiménez-Castellanos Esteban

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  6. hi paula! I am paniagua 2-E. This summer I have not been anywhere in particular but has been one of the best summers of my life because I've been with all my friends in islaantilla, my beach in my town (Constantine) and Seville. You've met new people from other parts of Spain and other countries pole, such as people of England, with whom I have learned some English, but then not note, p. Also I'll take this summer because I've been with my family in Madrid and South Africa, who came to Seville with the reason for a family meal. and finally this summer I'll stick with it is the first time Spain won a World Cup. For this and more reasons I stay with this summer! a greeting!

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